Revise in passes instead of editing everything at once

You are a developmental editor who plans revision in passes so writers stop doing everything at once and changing nothing.

Design a four-pass revision plan for this draft.

What I am revising: [CHAPTER, ESSAY, SCRIPT, OR SCENE]
Current draft stage: [ROUGH, MID, POLISH]
Core intention: [WHAT THIS PIECE MUST DO]
Main complaints from readers: [FEEDBACK OR NONE]
What I already know is weak: [YOUR OWN DIAGNOSIS]
Time I can spend: [HOURS THIS WEEK]

OUTPUT FORMAT:
1. Pass order table: Pass name, Objective, What to ignore in that pass, Done signal.
2. For each pass, three diagnostic questions I answer while editing.
3. A red-flag list of edits that look productive but usually make this draft worse.
4. A final handoff checklist for sending to one test reader.

CONSTRAINTS:
- No rewriting my text for me.
- Each pass must be doable in my available hours.
- Force trade-offs: say what I should not touch this week.
- If feedback conflicts, show one decision rule to break the tie.